I genuinely really like the idea Alex ! It'd be most successful in England I'd imagine as MC's appear to be more common in cities, maybe include that somehow? It's different to everyone else's ideas. The age range fits the genre well and you've clearly thought through your pitch including the best choice of words. :)
I really like the presentation of the pitch! i also like the idea of the young MC's getting a chance for some publicity as the audience may enjoy something different from regular artists.
i loved the video and thought it allowed you to show your creativity. however, there is one small issue and that's the age group that you've aimed your magazine at. i don't think that 14 years of age would be entirely suitable for this age group, however, if you changed it to 16, it would be more suitable for the images and culture etc. apart form that, great name and good ideas. keep it up!
Oh Hi Alex, One is not really an expert on this one particular genre. However, I do feel that you have produced an excellent pitch, and feel that the idea you have will prove hugely popular with the audience in the middle of you target range i.e. 18-22. I also feel that your idea of focussing on unproven musicians is a excellent Unique Selling Point, and would help attract potential customers.
I think this sounds like it should be a successful magazine. The target group is right but the age group could probably start at an older audience e.g. 16. Apart from that I think if everything works the way you want, it should be a successful mag.
I genuinely really like the idea Alex ! It'd be most successful in England I'd imagine as MC's appear to be more common in cities, maybe include that somehow?
ReplyDeleteIt's different to everyone else's ideas. The age range fits the genre well and you've clearly thought through your pitch including the best choice of words. :)
I really like the presentation of the pitch!
ReplyDeletei also like the idea of the young MC's getting a chance for some publicity as the audience may enjoy something different from regular artists.
i loved the video and thought it allowed you to show your creativity. however, there is one small issue and that's the age group that you've aimed your magazine at. i don't think that 14 years of age would be entirely suitable for this age group, however, if you changed it to 16, it would be more suitable for the images and culture etc. apart form that, great name and good ideas. keep it up!
ReplyDeleteOh Hi Alex,
ReplyDeleteOne is not really an expert on this one particular genre. However, I do feel that you have produced an excellent pitch, and feel that the idea you have will prove hugely popular with the audience in the middle of you target range i.e. 18-22. I also feel that your idea of focussing on unproven musicians is a excellent Unique Selling Point, and would help attract potential customers.
I think this sounds like it should be a successful magazine. The target group is right but the age group could probably start at an older audience e.g. 16. Apart from that I think if everything works the way you want, it should be a successful mag.
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